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gayacademicwriter:

magpiefngrl:

eddiestarchild:

jaskierist:

flootzavut:

notesoftruth:

jawnwats:

prismatic-bell:

cj-amused:

tenoko1:

evildorito:

onewordtest:

trikruwriter:

“This is your daily, friendly reminder to use commas instead of periods during the dialogue of your story,” she said with a smile.

“Unless you are following the dialogue with an action and not a dialogue tag.” He took a deep breath and sat back down after making the clarifying statement. 

“However,” she added, shifting in her seat, “it’s appropriate to use a comma if there’s action in the middle of a sentence.”

“True.” She glanced at the others. “You can also end with a period if you include an action between two separate statements.”

Things I didn’t know

“And–” she waved a pen as though to underline her statement–“if you’re interrupting a sentence with an action, you need to type two hyphens to make an en-dash.”

You guys have no idea how many students in my advanced fiction workshop didn’t know any of this when writing their stories.

Okay, but someone please explain question marks when followed by a dialogue tag. How do?

“The speech tag is still part of the previous sentence,” she explained, ‘so it isn’t capitalised.“

“What do you mean?” he asked. “But there’s a full stop as part of the question mark!”

She nodded gravely. “I know!” she said. “A lot of people find this confusing. But the speech tag belongs to the line of dialogue, it’s still part of the sentence, so it’s wrong to capitalise it.”

She reblogged the post again, because she had recently read far too many potentially enjoyable stories marred by poor dialogue punctuation.

I’ve only seen this post in screenshots till now..

NOICE. Can’t wait to use this

“There are two more ways"—she pointed to the blackboard—“to punctuate interruptions. One is with the em dashes outside the quotations marks to indicate continuous speech. The action occurs at the same time as speech. The other—” she sipped from a glass of water “—is em dashes within the quotation marks to indicate interrupted speech.”

i’ve been waiting for this to show up on my dash sldkjflsdkj 

anyways yeah the amount of stuff i did not know until i read this in screenshots and the like 

punctuation is important kids 

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spammybloggy:

I’m not attracted to the Joker

I’m not attracted to the Joker

I’m not attracted to the Joker

I’m not attracted to the Joker

I’m not attracted to the Joker

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Fuck.

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fleckerdgirl:

Share this Bran of luck to get a job without any experience

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hexglyphs:

hexglyphs:

not to sound like a baby boomer in need of a facebook intervention or anything but most of the kids with siblings i know now each have their own personal video games consoles and while i agree it’s not a bad way to prevent unnecessary arguments and rivalries if you can afford it it also makes me laugh because back in MY DAY we had ONE FAMILY COMPUTER and we all had to FIGHT for our turn

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